Six Still Narrative
The story I aimed to show is James being bored in his lesson, which
causes him to fall asleep. The following shot shows him laying on a
grass in a 'magical land'. He is dreaming of playing basketball, being
really happy. The second last shot shows the ball bouncing towards the
camera, which is like the viewer receiving a wake up call; they can
imagine the way James felt .He is then woken up and realises it was all
a dream, hence the sad/upset expression, as he has to go back to
reality.
I think the shots were mostly successful, as the story overall flows and
it is easy to tell what is happening. The second shot is blurry, which
emphasises the fact that James is zoning out and that the following
shots will be his dream.
The shots could have been improved, if we controlled the lighting more.
For example, the second shot, the ISO could have been changed too a
lower number to make the image darker, because James is 'falling
asleep'. We could also improve by in the first image, positioning
everyone in the frame, in a way which would allow everyone to be fully
visible, and not blocking each other
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